The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The provided diagram indicate the amounts of store that closed and opened in one country in 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, for most of the period, the number of closing stores
was higher than that of new stores
. In addition
, Those of closing stores
and new stores
considerably fluctuated throughout the period.
In 2011, the figure for shop
openings
stood at around 8500. In 2012, that of shop
openings
plunged to almost 4000 before increasing to nearly 6000 in 2014. Meanwhile, that
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shop
closures
oscillated between 2011 and 2014.
In 2014, the number of shop
closures
was higher than that of shop
openings
, which was close to 6000. In 2015, that of shop
closures
reached its lowest point at about 500, being less than that of shop
openings
, with around 4000, before surging to roughly 5000 in 2016. In 2016 and 2018, that of shop
closures
vacillated, and it was more than that of shop
openings
in 2018, with approximately 5000. Also
, In 2018, that
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of
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shop
openings
hit rock bottom at close to 3000.Submitted by ccaa785412dd on
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