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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this

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Some people believe that
parents
 should
responsible
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 for teaching kids how to be good
members
 of
society
.
This
 is because,
parents
 have a close relationship with their children and can provide guidance. They are able to
install
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instil
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 important life lessons
such
 as empathy, kindness and respect
though
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through
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 day-to-day interactions and family traditions.
Moreover
, youngsters try to be like their
parents
.
For example
, if they are good
members
 of
society
, their kids
also
 try to be like them.
On the other hand
, there are those
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 that school is the place to learn how to be good
members
 of
society
.
Schools
 have structured curriculars that include subjects like social studies and character education which aim to teach
student
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students
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 about citizenship and community
involvements
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.
Additionally
,
schools
 provide opportunities for students to interact with peers from diverse backgrounds. In my opinion, both
parents
 and
schools
 play important roles in teaching children how to be good
members
 of
society
.
Parents
 have a strong influence on your children's values and behaviors at home
while
schools
 provide formal education and opportunities for social development. It is crucial for
parents
 and
schools
 to work together in order to a positive learning environment that promotes moral values and responsibilities
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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