The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The data on spending money on three categories of life-first materials was demonstrated for five countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey).
This
table consists of the percentage of national consumer expenditure.
The first category is food, drinks, and tobacco. Turkish are those who have the highest percentage of expenditure in this
field almost about 32.14 per cent
. Sweden with 15.77 per cent
has the lowest share.
The second group is clothing and footwear. In contrast
with the first category, Italians are a major population that buys clothes and footwear with 9 per cent
. Finally
, the last
clique is leisure and education. This
classification is very tight and a minority of societies pay for such
items. Turkey is in the lead with 4.35 per cent
.
The table shows the range of money that has been spent on a different area of life. In conclusion, these categories indicate that countries with high expenditures on food, drinks, and tobacco have also
high expenditures on leisure and education. However
, this
relation is vice versa with clothing and footwear.Submitted by ahmad976mohammadip on
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