Digital Communication Technology, such as emails, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for you answer and include examples.
With the advancements made in the technological field,
it
is Correct pronoun usage
there
with
no doubt that communication has greatly improved between people. I strongly agree with Change preposition
apply
this
.
Firstly
, the advent of mobile phone devices has made communication easier and faster. People can talk to their loved ones via phone and video calls at anytime, anywhere and at their own convenience. For instance
, a person in America can contact another in Ghana within a space of minutes as opposed to the past where
it took several months for written Correct word choice
when
lettters
to be delivered across nations.
Correct your spelling
letters
Also
, news
in one country spreads to the whole world within a short matter of time. Thus
through social media news
is shared across the globe with ease. To illustrate this
, the death of Queen Elizabeth who lived in the united kingdom
got to other countries through Correct your spelling
United Kingdom
news
items broadcasted on popular news
houses. It was also
shared instantly on various social media platforms.
To sum up
, digital technology has improved our communication with respect to news
delivery and talking among loved ones.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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