The bar chart shows the percentage of total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

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represents the total proportion of world inhabits in 4 different countries in 1950, 2003 and predictions for 2050.

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the beginning of the period China had the highest amount of

population

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while

Japan

experienced the lowest percentage of

population

in 1950 and 2003. Looking at the details closely, in India in 1950 the total

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of

people

consisted of 15%, after some decades in 2002 it was

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the range of (about) 17%. The growth of

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for the future in India

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is predicted under 20% (18% approximately). In China, the earliest date (1950) made

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roughly 23% of

people

. In the following

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the rate of citizens decreased (20%). It is

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that, in the

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the proportion of

people

will experience a rapid decrease (15%). Turning back to the details, the USA and

Japan

are indicators of the lowest number of

population

. Prediction of the USA

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2050 and 2002 year are at the matching number of 5%,

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be comprised of about 7%.

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population

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from the USA with slight differences. The minimum number was predicted for

Japan

for the future 1%,

however

in 1950 and 2002

Japan

had a tiny contrast.