Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in societ of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it important for children to make decisions about matters affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There have been
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views about whether a child should decide on their daily concerns
such
as clothes they will wear or food they will eat.
While
some people think that it is important to let children
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decide on their own,
others
think that they will become
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self-centered
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person
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who just
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their
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own wishes. In my opinion, they should be given some freedom to make choices but there must be a limit. On
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side, there are people who believe
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children
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should not decide by
theirselves
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because they think they will raise as a person who will not care
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people’s opinions. These individuals may
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lack
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responsibility toward
others
and cannot make
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for
greater
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good.
Therefore
, they become a person who cannot compromise which may lead to conflicts throughout their lifetime. On the other side, some believe that it is significant for a child to decide on everyday matters. They think that it will enhance
child’s
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decision-making skills and promote independence.
Furthermore
, they think that children will build up
self confidence
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and freedom to express themselves.
Additionally
, children who are allowed to make their own choices may have a better understanding of the consequences of their actions. In my
opinion
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it is so essential to let
childrens
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children
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decide on everyday matters with certain limitations.
While
childeren
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children
needs
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to understand the importance of responsibility toward society and compromise with
others
, it is
also
essential to understand their identity,
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develop
self confidence
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for their adult life. In conclusion, is it essential
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a child decide by themselves on everyday matters? Some
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that
this
lead
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to self-centredness the
others
think that
this
is important for their growth. I strongly believe that it is important
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children’s be allowed to decide on their own within a reasonable limit to promote both
self confidence
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self-confidence
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and
sense
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a sense
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of responsibility.
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