Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in societ of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it important for children to make decisions about matters affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There have been
conflict
views about whether a child should decide on their daily concerns Change the verb form
conflicting
conflicted
such
as clothes they will wear or food they will eat. While
some people think that it is important to let children to
decide on their own, Change the verb form
apply
others
think that they will become Add an article
a self-centered
the self-centered
self-centered
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self-centred
person
who just Fix the agreement mistake
people
care
Change the verb form
cares
their
own wishes. In my opinion, they should be given some freedom to make choices but there must be a limit.
On Change preposition
about their
one
side, there are people who believe Correct article usage
the one
childrens
should not decide by Correct your spelling
children
theirselves
because they think they will raise as a person who will not care Correct your spelling
themselves
other
people’s opinions. These individuals may Change preposition
about other
be
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
responsibility toward Change preposition
apply
others
and cannot make sacrifice
for Fix the agreement mistake
sacrifices
greater
good. Add an article
the greater
Therefore
, they become a person who cannot compromise which may lead to conflicts throughout their lifetime.
On the other side, some believe that it is significant for a child to decide on everyday matters. They think that it will enhance child’s
decision-making skills and promote independence. Correct article usage
the child’s
Furthermore
, they think that children will build up self confidence
and freedom to express themselves. Add a hyphen
self-confidence
Additionally
, children who are allowed to make their own choices may have a better understanding of the consequences of their actions.
In my opinion
it is so essential to let Add a comma
,opinion
childrens
decide on everyday matters with certain limitations. Correct your spelling
children
While
childeren
Correct your spelling
children
needs
to understand the importance of responsibility toward society and compromise with Correct subject-verb agreement
need
others
, it is also
essential to understand their identity, Correct word choice
and develeo
develeo
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develop
self confidence
for their adult life.
In conclusion, is it essential Add a hyphen
self-confidence
let
a child decide by themselves on everyday matters? Some Fix the infinitive
to let
argued
that Wrong verb form
argue
this
lead
to self-centredness the Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
others
think that this
is important for their growth. I strongly believe that it is important to
children’s be allowed to decide on their own within a reasonable limit to promote both Change preposition
for to
self confidence
and Add a hyphen
self-confidence
sense
of responsibility.Correct article usage
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