Nowadays there is a shortage of housing which has given rise to several social consequences. It is only the government who can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Shortage of housing has been a
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of the modern world for a
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now and it has led to multiple serious problems in our society. Many argue that
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it is the
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's responsibility to find a solution to
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problem
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others believe
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and
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, third party companies could play an important role. I totally agree with the former opinion. Because, housing is a part of every
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's job and indeed, they have enough tools to solve
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, I do not think
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have enough resources or enough permission to deal with
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, the major policies imposed by governments are the forces behind peoples' actions and
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,
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's difficulties are of
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's concern. Different countries usually have a whole department specific for
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cause and
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, their job is to build just enough
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for the
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and to prevent housing from becoming a crisis.
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, Iran's housing secretary has promised the construction of thousands of
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for the homeless
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of Tehran, the capital of Iran. So, it is a pretty big deal for every
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to solve the shortage of
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in every country.
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, some folk want to hold the
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accountable for
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problem
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as if they have enough power to solve
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riddle. Few
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are able to build themselves
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and others can barely afford to rent
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.
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, it is not a profitable business for the rich to build
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for the poor.
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, the third-party companies might not be able to proceed with the paperwork necessary because of all of the laws imposed on housing matters.
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, it takes about one year for any company to get permission to start their construction.
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, not
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nor third parties can easily get involved with
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problem
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and help the
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along the way.
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, the shortage of housing could be a serious crisis in any modern society. With enough resource and will, the
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are going to be essential to finding a solution.
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the
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and the various construction companies might have the intention to get involved with it, they usually don't have enough resources and it could be a waste of money and energy without actually getting anything done.
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