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The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002

The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
 of
people
 connected to the
internet
 continuously in the
first
 two years of the 21st century.
Besides
, the remaining table chart shows the change in the years 2001 and 2002.
Overall
, the
people
 who use the
internet
 the most are mainly from the Americas. In European countries, the
number
 of
internet
 users has increased dramatically.
First
, the share of servers connected to the
internet
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 increased by more than 20% between 2001 and 2002. Specifically, 122
people
 were continuously connected to the network in 2001 and in 2002, and the
number
 of
people
 who used high-speed
internet
 had reached 134.4
connections
 per
1000
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1,000
people
.
Moreover
, the US received 251.1
connections
 per 1000
people
 in 2002,
while
 devices that used high-speed
internet
 in 2001 had only 93
connections
 per 1000
people
.
This
 means that the total
number
 of
connections
 to
high speed
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internet
 has jumped
for
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 more than 170%
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.
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Additionally
, in Germany, there were 3.4
connections
 per 1000
people
 in the
first
 year of the 21st century and 5,616
connections
 to
high speed
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high-speed
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internet
 a year later. The percentage of customers using
high speed
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internet
 in Germany
had
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 shot up
for
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by
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 more than 80% since 2001.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, the percentage of servers using
high speed
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internet
 in Switzerland increased by 120% in 2002. Especially, the level of connectivity to the
internet
 in Switzerland increased from 3.6 to 7.92 in 2001 and 2002.
Finally
, the
number
 of high-speed
internet
 users in the UK increased dramatically in the
first
 two years of the 2000s, the initial index from 3.3
connections
 per 1000
people
 increased to 10.89
connections
.
This
 is the country with the highest percentage increase compared to the other 4 countries
although
 the amount of
internet
 connection only ranks 3rd in the bar chart.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, internet, first, connections with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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