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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the classification of households' annual revenues in three classes and demonstrates the
population
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 in millions regarding the classification in the United States in 2007,2011 and 2015. As an overview, the significant feature that can be seen from
this
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 chart is that the number of households with $100,000 or more annual
income
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 increased massively from 2007 to 2015.
Also
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, the
population
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 of households with $50000 to $74999 yearly
income
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 remains steady over
this
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 8-year period. As it can be observable,
however
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, the highest
income
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 category and the annual
income
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 of $75K to $99.99K experienced a negligible decline from 2007 to 20011 and reached approximately 27
million
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 and 14
million
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 respectively, the figure for them both shows the rise in
population
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 which was noticeable for the highest
income
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group
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 with close to 33
million
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population
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 and was negligible for another
group
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 with 15
million
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 of
householders
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.
On the other hand
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, both the number of
householders
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 in the least annual remuneration
group
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 and the $25K to $49.99K
group
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 became more in 2011 and achieved roughly 27 and 30
million
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householders
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 that year.
In contrast
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, both of these groups experienced a small decline in 2015 with a decrease of nearly 1
million
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 of their populations.
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, the number of
householders
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 with $50K to $74.99K annual revenue remains steady in
this
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 given time period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, income, k, million, group, householders with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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