The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the average of expensive metals price, over a nine-period
year
between 2013 and 2021.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that gold and palladium of precious metals increased significantly over the entire time period. Whereas
platinum’s metal decreased gradually during the period.
Gold was the second biggest metal price in history in 2013 which was just below 1,500 dollars
per oz
and declined consistently next two years to around 1,200 dollars
per oz
in 2015. However
, the figure showed a fluctuation between 2016 and 2019 and it accounted for just under 1,500 dollars
per oz
. Then
, it significantly grew in 2020 and the next year
, gold remained relatively stable. Palladium was the lowest overall
user at the start of the period at around 700 dollars
per oz
and rose remarkably every year
to nearly 2,500 dollars
per oz
.
Platinum was the largest segment in 2013 and amounted to roughly 1,500 dollars
per oz
and this
consistently dropped year
to year
to almost 900 dollars
per oz
in 2020. Nevertheless
, it climbed and made up just above 1,000 dollars
per oz
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