The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures
The diagram shows the various stages of
milk
processing methods and the production of dairy products, milk
packets, and their techniques. Overall
you can see that the process undergoes eight stages to produce the milk
products and milk
packets from fresh milk
.
The 1st step which is the farming process begin with the rearing of healthy
cow which are allowed to graze on grass Add an article
a healthy
the healthy
in
the farm to increase their Change preposition
on
milk
production, then
the milk
machine is been put into place to extract milk
from the healthy cows. The milk
extracted from the healthy cows is stored in a storage refrigerator which helps to maintain a cool temperature before the vehicle (tanker) conveys the milk
to the processing unit where the milk
is been separated into various varieties.
From the processing unit, the milk
is separated into milk
products which are been pasteurized, packaged and distributed to the supermarket and some are been made into butter, cheese and cream also
packaged and distributed to the supermarket. ,Finally
all ends with the consumers.Add a comma
,Finally
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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