The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of the
population
for different regions and their associated
wealth
.
Overall
, North
America
owns the share of
wealth
,
while
Africa and India have the lowest
percentage
of
wealth
. China is the most populated
area
in the world,
whereas
Rich Asia-Pacific is the least crowded place.
To begin
, North
America
owns 35% of the total
wealth
in the world with a little more than 5%
population
. The second richest
area
is Europe with almost a 30% share of global
wealth
,
while
its
crowd
is three times of American
population
. The next rich
area
is Rich Asia-Pacific which owns one-fifth of global
wealth
and almost equal
population
of
America
. India and Africa are the poorest regions with an insignificant proportion of
wealth
,
while
they have an impressive share of the
crowd
. India has 15% of the
population
and Africa has two-thirds of India’s
crowd
. The second poor
area
is China and other Asia-Pacific with 3% of world
wealth
. The
percentage
of the
population
of China and other Asia pacific is 23% and 17% respectively. For Latin
America
and
Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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, the proportion of
wealth
is two times
of
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its
crowd
percentage
, 7% of global
wealth
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, wealth, america, area, crowd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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