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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more imporatant environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are so many environmental problems but even
loss
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the loss
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 of particular species of
plants
 and
animals
 is
also
 a
problem
. In my own opinion, there are more
imporatant
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important
 environmental
problem
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problems
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 than
loss
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the loss
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 of particular species of
plants
 and
animals
.
Loss
 of particular
spies
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species
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 of
plant
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plants
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 and
animals
 is
also
 a
problem
. Each
plants
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plant
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 and
animals
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animal
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are
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is
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 an important part
in
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of
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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. To save
plants
 the
government
 should make rules for it.
For example
,
Indian
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the Indian
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government
are try
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are trying
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 to save
white
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the white
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 tiger to save
animals
.
However
,
a
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the
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 public should
also
 contribute
in
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to
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 saving
animals
 and
plants
.
Due to
,
loss
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the loss
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 of
plants
an
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and
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animals
 public should support NGOs. People should save street
animals
 and birds because it there
reponsiblty
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responsibility
responsibly
. Other than
loss
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the loss
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 of
plants
 there are other more environmental
problem
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problems
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 like saving
trees
, air
pollution
,
noice
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noise
pollution
, land
pollution
, water
pollution
 and much more like
this
 kind. the
government
 should focus on all types of issues.
For example
,
nation
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the nation
a nation
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 should focus on saving
trees
 because
trees
 play
an
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a
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 great role in
this
.
Thus
, the
government
 should support NGOs
who
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that
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 are improving nature.
Hence
, the
government
 should spread awareness about its importance. The
government
 should support NGOs but
public
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the public
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 should save
animals
 too.
While
, By planting more and more
trees
 many
problem
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problems
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 can be save environmental. Whenever
,
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apply
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 Adopting
animals
 and
brids
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birds
 can help
environmentenvironmental
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environment environmental
.
To conclude
, saving
loss
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the loss
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 of species of
plants
 and
animals
 is good but there are so many there
issuse
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issues
 other than
this
. In my own opinion, there are so many there more
imporatant
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important
environment
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environmental
show examples
 problems.
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