Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more imporatant environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are so many environmental problems but even

loss

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the loss

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of particular species of

plants

and

animals

is

also

a

problem

. In my own opinion, there are more

imporatant

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important

environmental

problem

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problems

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than

loss

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the loss

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of particular species of

plants

and

animals

.

Loss

of particular

spies

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species

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of

plant

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plants

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and

animals

is

also

a

problem

. Each

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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animal

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are

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is

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an important part

in

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of

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ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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. To save

plants

the

government

should make rules for it.

For example

,

Indian

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the Indian

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government

are try

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are trying

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to save

white

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the white

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tiger to save

animals

.

However

,

a

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the

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public should

also

contribute

in

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to

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saving

animals

and

plants

.

Due to

,

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

an

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and

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animals

public should support NGOs. People should save street

animals

and birds because it there

reponsiblty

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responsibility

responsibly

. Other than

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

there are other more environmental

problem

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problems

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like saving

trees

, air

pollution

,

noice

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noise

pollution

, land

pollution

, water

pollution

and much more like

this

kind. the

government

should focus on all types of issues.

For example

,

nation

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the nation

a nation

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should focus on saving

trees

because

trees

play

an

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a

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great role in

this

.

Thus

, the

government

should support NGOs

who

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that

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are improving nature.

Hence

, the

government

should spread awareness about its importance. The

government

should support NGOs but

public

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the public

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should save

animals

too.

While

, By planting more and more

trees

many

problem

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problems

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can be save environmental. Whenever

,

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apply

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Adopting

animals

and

brids

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birds

can help

environmentenvironmental

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environment environmental

.

To conclude

, saving

loss

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the loss

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of species of

plants

and

animals

is good but there are so many there

issuse

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issues

other than

this

. In my own opinion, there are so many there more

imporatant

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important

environment

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environmental

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problems.