In the contemporary era,
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many scientific advancements improved human living standard,
however
,
this
also
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people stuck in the financial rat race
due to
industrialization. The financial pressure before and
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retirementCorrect article usage
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period makes the elderly feel awful.
However
, I firmly believe that life for the elderly has never been better than now,
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I will explain
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in the following essay.
Nowadays, the more effort they put in to escape
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wellbeingCorrect your spelling
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rat race to have
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life, the worsening they encounter in
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aspect.
This
becomes important for
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due to
they have to deal with
retirement
ages as
thoseCorrect pronoun usage
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have more time and little
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income, so the financial
retirement
plan ahead is critical. In their pursuit of success, reputation and fame, they have crammed
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to complete, which take them from their life, damaging fragile relationships.
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, with information technology advances, they can keep in touch with their relationship through social message
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including video
callFix the agreement mistake
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or
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text
contentsFix the agreement mistake
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. So, people have more
to connect, share
interestFix the agreement mistake
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and express
yourselfCorrect pronoun usage
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with the same wavelength in
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community.
Nevertheless
, these
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also
allow them to access streaming services with Netflix as an example, which provide
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genre
contentsFix the agreement mistake
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from TV shows, film series or documentary materials.
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the development in some decade recently showed the improvement in
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home with modern facilities
such
as indoor swimming pool and the
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of gentle exercise,
this
action
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between
elderlyCorrect article usage
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in
thisCorrect determiner usage
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facilities. Senior
citizenFix the agreement mistake
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also
create some local community
projectFix the agreement mistake
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a way to deal with more time in
retirementCorrect pronoun usage
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period and participate in offline events of digital
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they love. It is undeniable that there are
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better
note worthyAdd a hyphen
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health careCorrect your spelling
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services with affordable
priceFix the agreement mistake
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, which enhance
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standardFix the agreement mistake
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.
In conclusion, despite the financial pressure before
retirement
age,
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senior
citizenFix the agreement mistake
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are received better living
standardFix the agreement mistake
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formCorrect your spelling
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both material and spiritual
aspectFix the agreement mistake
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, as they have
abilityChange the article
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to connect with relatives and like-minded
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and
harmonyReplace the word
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relationshipFix the agreement mistake
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with others in
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facilityFix the agreement mistake
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.
Last
but not least, they
also
received better health care services.