A growing number of people rely or restaurants and convenience food (Frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?
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the demerits like it is an inadequate source of essential minerals, vitamins, and proteins. Both advantages and disadvantages are Linking Words
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as these foods are ready to eat. Because these meals are pre-cooked and have a longer shelf life, they can be enjoyedUse synonyms
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