Obesity is increasing in many developing countries affecting the children. What are some possible reasons for this and suggest possible solutions

It has been observed that there is a dramatic rise in children's weight in many developing countries ,for several causes , a lack

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sports ,junk

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, and lifestyle. solution has been identified for

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problem . beginning,the main reason for

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unhealthy issue is fast

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stance McDonald's ,

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, Practicing sedentary activities watching television , playing computer games ,or spending time with a smartphone ,

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, that can make children lazy and overweight without the actions

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, the school does not have more classes focusing on exercise,

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the curriculum does not include healthy

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and the way of good nutrition , To solve

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problem there are measures being taken to curb

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, the one point is the government should stop the restaurant with junk

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, and striped it to have healthy nutrition ,

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, the parents should have time to prepare healthy meals that include fruit and vegetables, Meanwhile, the school should do many extra sports exercises and classes

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the importance of health.example, the USA

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issue is a personability for all people in society to build a good generation from school and family part and parcel , to help wards to be in a good health by the solution

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mention in the up.