The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 to 2012.

The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 to 2012.
The line graph compares how three different types of crime
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of Newport City over the period of 9 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the number of robbery
incidents
was by far
lowest
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throughout the research period.
Additionally
, the figure for burglary experienced the most drastic change from 2003 to 2012. In 2003, the quantity of burglary
incidents
was highest, at just over 3,400
cases
. Meanwhile, that of robbery was significantly lower, at nearly 600
cases
, which was just one-fourth of the figure for car theft, at roughly 2,400
cases
. In the year 2008, the number of
incidents
of burglary witnessed a dramatic drop from about 3,400 to more than a thousand
cases
,
then
it saw a moderate recovery to approximately 1,400
cases
at the end
of the period. At the same time, the figure for car theft
incidents
climbed slightly by 400 to around 2,800
cases
whereas
that of
incidents
of robbery fluctuated between 500 and 1000
cases
during all the years.
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