Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

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It is of concern whether or not the national authorities should fund good
road
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systems or rather spend on establishing a
well running
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public transport system.
To begin
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with, a good
road
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network saves
time
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to
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for
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the
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apply
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road
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- users. It mostly eliminates traffic and makes workers and students reach their destination on
time
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. To illustrate
this
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, when moving on untarred
roads
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, the regular drivers who use
such
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roads
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take their
time
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to protect their vehicles from
damages
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. By so doing, a journey expected to take 20 minutes by the estimated distance is covered in hours.
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, inhabitants of Sokoban spend several hours on the
road
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when going to the
town-square
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town square
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due to
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the poor nature of their
roads
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which is only 50 kilometres from town. Huge traffic jams are commonly observed at most hours of the day on the Sokoban stretch owing to careful driving on these bad
roads
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. Meanwhile, natives of Santasi with feeder
roads
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cover the same distance in 20 minutes to reach
town
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the town
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.
It is clear that
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the benefits of a good
road
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cannot be overemphasized,
hence
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I lean for authorities
investing
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to invest
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funds into constructing good
road
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systems to save
time
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.
On the other hand
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, commercial means of
transports
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transport
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such
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as buses, trains and subways should
also
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be improved by the government to make patronising their services attractive. The first advantage of
this
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is fewer vehicles on our
roads
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. Most private owners will use public
transports
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with good services. By so doing, traffic will be reduced on our
roads
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.
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, the problem
with
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of
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global warming will
also
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be tackled somehow as fewer vehicles means reduced toxic fumes from cars into the atmosphere. In a
nut shell
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, these reasons
makes
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it evident why it is necessary for lawmakers to channel some amounts in maintaining public transport systems.
To sum up
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, government spending should include both making good
roads
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and building a
well functioning
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well-functioning
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public transport system.
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