Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

It is of concern whether or not the national authorities should fund good

road

systems or rather spend on establishing a

well running

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public transport system.

To begin

with, a good

road

network saves

time

to

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the

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apply

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road

- users. It mostly eliminates traffic and makes workers and students reach their destination on

time

. To illustrate

this

, when moving on untarred

roads

, the regular drivers who use

such

roads

take their

time

to protect their vehicles from

damages

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. By so doing, a journey expected to take 20 minutes by the estimated distance is covered in hours.

For example

, inhabitants of Sokoban spend several hours on the

road

when going to the

town-square

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due to

the poor nature of their

roads

which is only 50 kilometres from town. Huge traffic jams are commonly observed at most hours of the day on the Sokoban stretch owing to careful driving on these bad

roads

. Meanwhile, natives of Santasi with feeder

roads

cover the same distance in 20 minutes to reach

town

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.

It is clear that

the benefits of a good

road

cannot be overemphasized,

hence

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investing

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funds into constructing good

road

systems to save

time

.

On the other hand

, commercial means of

transports

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transport

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such

as buses, trains and subways should

also

be improved by the government to make patronising their services attractive. The first advantage of

this

is fewer vehicles on our

roads

. Most private owners will use public

transports

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with good services. By so doing, traffic will be reduced on our

roads

.

Also

, the problem

with

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global warming will

also

be tackled somehow as fewer vehicles means reduced toxic fumes from cars into the atmosphere. In a

nut shell

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, these reasons

makes

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it evident why it is necessary for lawmakers to channel some amounts in maintaining public transport systems.

To sum up

, government spending should include both making good

roads

and building a

well functioning

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well-functioning

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public transport system.