The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
The display graph shows the sales of children's
books
, adult fiction and educational books
between 2002 and 2006 in one nation.
The sales of three different kinds of books
between 2002 and 2006 in one country. The data is given in millions of dollars. In children's books
, in the year
2002, it was more than 30, in the year
2003, it was nearly 40, in the year
2004 as well as
2005 it was around 40 and in the year
2006 it was more than 55. In Adult fiction in the year
2002, it was more than 45, in the
2003, it was nearly 35, in the Change the article
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year
2004 it was
increased by 40, in the Unnecessary verb
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year
2005 it was around 35 and in the year
2006, it was 30. In the Educational books
, in the year
2002
it was around 25, in the Add a comma
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year
2003 it was more than 30, in the year
2004 it was more than 25, in the year
2005 it was more than 26 and in the year
2006, it was more than 30.
To conclude
, the above information describes about
the sales of three different kinds of Remove the preposition
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books
between 2002 and 2006.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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