The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The picture provides a comprehensive comparison of how the
park
changes from 1980 to the present.
Overall
, the park
has a
considerable development from natural design to social function by providing more public facilities. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, the park
used to display
as a closed place and Wrong verb form
be displayed
transforms
Wrong verb form
transformed
to
Change preposition
into
open
public space.
Upon Correct article usage
an open
further
observation, In
the southwest side, All the flowers Change preposition
On
was
cleared and replaced Change the verb form
were
to
Change preposition
with
the
bush. The couple of gates Correct article usage
apply
which
located in the south and the west of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
park
was
taken out and Correct subject-verb agreement
were
make
Wrong verb form
made
way
to the expansion of pedestrian Correct pronoun usage
their way
facilitiy
in the Correct your spelling
facilities
facility
park
. In addition
, The pond surrounded by benches remains intact.
Turning to the other side of maps
, the Correct article usage
the maps
play ground
is constructed in place where Correct your spelling
playground
was
Verb problem
there is
Correct article usage
a flowers
flowers
garden. Change the noun form
flower
Furthermore
, The majority of tree
was removed to make way for the construction of additional public facilities Add an article
the tree
a tree
such
as chairs, desks, and berbecue
.Correct your spelling
barbecue
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