You would like to participate in a business seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information on the dates, the program, the accommodation and the cost.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am interested in the business seminar which your organization held in London . I would be grateful if you provide me with some details about it before the enrollment. Could you please inform me of the planning dates

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seminar in the following months? I would like to get more information about the agenda. How long will it take? I am wondering what topics will be mentioned in lectures and by whom. Will any certification or attendance documents be given to participants

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program? Could you please share with me the flyers or the brochures? I am living in Manchester,

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, I would be happy if you suggested to me possible hotels for my accommodation which are close to the seminar venue.

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, could you please inform me about the total costs and payment methods? I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Jane Austin

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