Why do you want to persue a career in veterinary medicine?

"Bleeding Heart" was the moniker used to describe my love and dedication for
animals
starting at a young age. My compassion for
animals
was innate, from escaping my family at the zoo only to be found standing under the muzzle of a Clydesdale to educating visitors about my rescue dog's quirks to ensure her comfort. My brother's brain
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diagnosis
further
fostered my intuitive nature to care for others. His operations and need for care resulted in my constant exposure to the medical
field
throughout my youth, inspiring an appreciation of its life-altering capacity. As one of seven children, I eagerly worked to understand my brother's condition to support my siblings best, igniting a passion for
medicine
and surgery. Admiring the intricacy of
medicine
from the perspective of those being saved by it, a foundation was built for a future in the
field
. Uniting my passion for
animals
and
medicine
, I joined a program to become a veterinary assistant, which allowed me a window into the realities of being a vet. I shadowed Dr.Sheriff, who shared his fondness for surgery and taught me the value of maintaining composure in times of stress to be an effective problem solver. I internalized
this
value when I identified that I had intubated a patient incorrectly, calmly communicated with my team, and re-intubated.
Although
a successful solution, the patient
consequently
acquired pneumonia
due to
my error. Instilling perseverance, the doctor insisted I perform the patient's follow-up care, including talking with the owners. The experience was eye-opening, teaching me how to take responsibility and trust myself again, building a confidence that didn't hinge on perfectionism. It served as an example of the weight of even our most minor actions in the
field
. It led to my understanding of the confidence and resilience required by vets balanced with precision and accountability when caring for
animals
. My experiences in emergency
medicine
have
further
instilled invaluable lessons and aspects of being a successful vet,
such
as the necessity of thoughtful communication and compassion. These characteristics galvanized me as I monitored
Baby
's vitals as her euthanasia sedative took effect. Understanding the bittersweet sadness of loss and relief of suffering, I asked the owner about her
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memories with
Baby
. Together, we sat, talking about
Baby
's life and the joy she brought to her family. I felt the peace it got to the owner and stayed throughout the euthanasia process. As I extended my condolences,
Baby
's owner embraced me, expressing her gratitude for being with her and letting her share
Baby
's story. Experiences
such
as these have taught me the value of building connections with clients and their companions and have served as a means of discovering my voice when communicating with owners. As I look back at my experiences and passions for
animals
,
medicine
, and surgery, I forge ahead toward a career uniting them all as a veterinary surgeon. The skills and knowledge I have honed working in the
field
have
further
fostered
this
aspiration and shaped me into an excellent candidate for veterinary school.
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