9/17, 1:39 AM] mehrdad Bs: In many countries, fewer and fewer people go to universities to study science. What's the reason for this? What can be done to encourage people to learn science

Nowadays, in many

nations

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young folks have shown less interest

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their time

to learn

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science at

universities

. In

this

essay, I will discuss what the reason for

this

and what can be done

Firstly

,

universities

have an important role

to increase

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the

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society's progress, because

this

is

a

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best platform to transfer

the

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valuable data in many

branch

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like

physic

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physics

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,

chemical

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,

math

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and math

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to new

generation

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. But unfortunately these days fewer people tend to

study

at college if we compare with past nations. In that way, one of the major reasons is that powers

has

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faced global economic problems in

this

decade,

hence

majority part of students who finish institutes

are

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work

less because governments can not prepare

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job conditions for them,

therefore

these groups have to

work

in different sectors with low salary, so

this

decade juvenile tend to stop studying after

get

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the diploma certificate because they know that if they had

continue

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their

study

would become jobless in the future.

On the other hand

, governments should lay the foundation for encouraging young folks to continue their higher education

study

at

universities

. Because of that, authorities have to change their priorities because students must know that if they get their certificate with

high

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score they

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find good jobs with high salary,

moreover

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they are going to have insurance for their future life.

For instance

,

person

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the person

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who became an engineer and

work

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as a

white color

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worker has more wealth condition than individuals who

work

as a

blue color

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worker.

In

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result

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, if students know that their authority

support

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their future they will prefer to continue their higher education at university. In conclusion, societies need

persons

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people

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with high educational knowledge,

therefore

powers have to give

guaranty

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to them with good job

condition

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and

salary

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. I certainly believe that we can increase the number of people who want to

study

at

universities

regarding

to

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best

low

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and support.