The chart gives information abour migration to the UK. The chart shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intented to stay in the UK. And the pir chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The chart depicts information about migrants and emigrants in the United Kingdom measured in thousands of people in 10 periods between 1999 and 2008. it is lower than the 150 fluctuations dramatic elevation peaked
Overall
it is noticeable that the amount of immigrants is gradually increasing year by year Linking Words
while
emigration fluctuated at Linking Words
same
level and increased only in the Add an article
the same
last
periods.
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To begin
with, immigration was at the level of 450 Linking Words
thousand
in 1999 and gradually raised to 500 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2002 and continued the increase, Use synonyms
as a result
reaching the peak of 0.6 million in 2006. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in the next two Linking Words
years
the line illustrated a slight decrease compared to the previous one.
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,years
On the other hand
, amount of emigrants in the UK is as not high as the Linking Words
quantity
of immigrants. Starting the point with 300 Change the quantifier
number
thousand
, in factUse synonyms
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,
thousand
of individuals compared to immigration. Fluctuating on that point 3 years, it slightly increased to 0.36 million. Use synonyms
However
, after yearsLinking Words
Change preposition
of
its
highest Change preposition
at its
points
at 400 Fix the agreement mistake
point
thousand
in 2006. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in 2008 the number of emigrants reached that point and slightly increased to 420.Linking Words
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