The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, all over the world, the topic of closing
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in towns and cities
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online shopping is omnipresent.
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some people think the advantages of online shopping exist, other people think there are disadvantages to online shopping. From my point of view, I agree with the first perspective for the reasons discussed below. On the one hand, as far as the growth of online shopping is concerned,
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, to a large extent, especially in modern times, no matter where in the world you live
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when you buy on the Internet, you can have a large choice of items
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the fact that you are surfing on the web until you found whatever you want, resulting in being happy.
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, and most importantly in recent years, you might earn time on account of the fact that you do not need to move into the cities leading to spending time in traffic and overcrowded areas.
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, there are disadvantages to online shopping. First and foremost, by and large, you can lose human contact in reason of the fact that you do not ask advice from the seller, resulting in buying the wrong items.
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, at least to some degree, when you work in city’
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, you can lose your job because of the lack of clients.
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, if everybody buys clothes online,
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will be closed and owners could lose their jobs. In conclusion,
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some people think that online shopping will lead to the closing of
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in towns and cities, others hold a different opinion.
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, in my opinion, the first perspective is the most persuasive for the above-mentioned reasons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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