Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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the popularity of

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, there a huge considerations about the

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of

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that

children

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spend daily on their

smartphones

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among the public.

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essay will evaluate the reasons behind

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problem like the

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of appropriate places for playing .

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, it will discuss why

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daily routine will have a negative advancement in their lives. There are many reasons why

children

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prefer spending so much of their

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on their

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. One of the exemplified reasons that should be considered is that a massive change has happened in the structure of homes. Most people used to live in houses which had the appropriate

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of space for

children

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to play.

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, these days people

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bad economic situations and the high cost of houses mostly live in small apartments which suffer from a

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of place to play games.

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,

children

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entertain themselves with mobile phones.

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,

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the many problems that parents face daily, they don't have enough

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to take their offspring to the park.

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specific daily routine

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has some negative impacts on the

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's lives.

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,

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daily routine not only has affected

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but

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will affect societies in the future.

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, humankind has improved its society by exploring science, it has used many of its developments unthoughtfully.

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daily usage of

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is

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an unthoughtful development that can lead to many devastating results.

Children

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by spending so much of their

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will not face as much as the real world and they will gain an unrealistic view of their environment.

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will not be the only major problem that they may experience. The researchers found out these

children

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suffer from a

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of communication skills with their peers. So personally, I consider

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problem not only a negative development

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but

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this

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may lead to imaginable destructions in different aspects of society,

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,

children

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spend so much on their mobile phones

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the

lack

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of

amount

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of place to play in their homes and the small

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of

time

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that parents spend with their offspring.

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not only be considered as a negative development in their life, like

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of communication, but

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will have many other negative impacts on society.