The graph below show the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

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variation in equipment,

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cardboard, glass containers, plastics , and aluminium that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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cardboard has a higher rate among the other materials

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than plastics .

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had been trained to the peak of the rate at 80% at the beginning of the period in 1994,

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class containers observe became record figure 60%, both of they started in 1990.

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, the Aluminium cans increased dramatically from 1986 until 2010 by 40%,

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plastics has growth slightly from 1990 to 2010 , From all these results we can be sure that high point attended by

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recycled.