**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**
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, in <25 there was more than 20000, in 25-34 there was more than 55000, in 35-44 as well as
in 45-54 there was nearly 80000, in 55-64 there was around 75000, in 65-74 there was around 55000 and in >75 there was around 35000. In Expenditures
the highest was in 45-54 with around 60000, in <25 there was 30000, in 25-34 there was 45000, in 35-44 there was 60000, in 55-64 there was 60000, in 65-74 there was 50000 and in >75 there was 30000. The data is in dollars. However
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