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many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise. What is your opinion?

#people #food #companies
AT PRESENT TIME NOMEROUS FOLKS
THOUGHT
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THINK
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 THAT IT IS BETTER TO NOT PERMISSION FOR COMPANIES TO
ADVERTISEING
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ADVERTISING
. IN MY OPINION, IS
ABSOLUTLY
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ABSOLUTELY
 AGREE WITH
THIS
 STATEMENT. I WILL EXPLAIN MY
VIEW POINTS
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VIEWPOINTS
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 IN DETAIL IN THE ENSUING PARAGRAPH.
FIRSTLY
, JUNK
FOOD
 IS
CRUCIAL
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A CRUCIAL
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 ISSUE GLOBALLY, ONE OF THE
MOST
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BIGGEST
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 TROUBLE THAT CAN WE FACE IN THESE DAYS, WHEN CHILDREN
ATTRACTED
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ARE ATTRACTED
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 TO
THIS
 TYPE OF
FOOD
 WHICH HAVE NOT BASIC NUTRIENT,
HENCE
 AFFECTING ON THEIR HEALTH, BY
MAKING
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CREATING
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 HIGH PRESSURE, AND OVER WIGHT, AS RESULT AS HIGH BLOOD SUGAR.
LAST
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ACCORDING TO LAST
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RESERCH
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RESEARCH
 BY DOCTORS, JUNK
FOOD
 CAN BE
TOOL
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A TOOL
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 OF
INCREASEING
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INCREASING
 SUGAR
40
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BY 40
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%.
SECONDLY
, THE STRICTNESS PROVISIONS SHOULD BE APPLIED TO MAKE SURE WE PROTECT OUR CHILDREN,
MOREOVER
, SUSTAIN THEIR
HELTHY
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HEALTH
 IS OUR
RESBONSIBILTY
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RESPONSIBILITY
,
THEREFORE
, WE HAVE TO REPLACE
THIS
 TYPE OF
FOOD
BY
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WITH
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HELTHY
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HEALTH
 THAT CONTAIN THE MAIN NUTRIENT FOR KIDS. IN
CONCLUDE
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CONCLUSION
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,
MAINTAINE
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MAINTAINING
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A HEALTH
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HEALTH
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HEALTHY
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 WEIGHT AND SUGAR FOR MOST KIDS IN OUR WORLD IS IMPORTANT THAT WE HAVE TO WORK FOR.
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