The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The display bar chart shows the number of times per
week
( in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet they are
ActiveX
,
Java
as well and Net. In
week
1, in
ActiveX
it was around 60, in
Java
it was more than 40 and in ,net it was around 40. In
week
2, in net it was around 40, in
java
it was around 50 and in
activeX
it was more than 80. In
week
3, in the net it was around 20, in
Java
it was more than 50 and in Acticex it was around 90. In
week
4, in the net it was 40, in
Java
it was 70 and in ,
ActiveX
it was 90. In
week
5, in the net it was 50, in
Java
it was 80 as well and in ,
ActiveX
it was 120.
To conclude
, the above information describes three computer packages that were downloaded from the internet
Activex
,
java
and Net.
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