The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The graph illustrates the shift in 3 different foods which are consumed by Chinese people over 25 years. It is presented about consuming food in
grams
/person/week.
Overall
, the consumption
of fish was significantly increased in the period. While
meat and salt had different trends which steadily went up and down, both foods were met at the same figure by 2010.
As can be seen from the graph, fish consumption
was settled at the highest than other foods by a number
of 600 grams
in 1985. In the following years
the trend fluctuated, it started to rise in the next 5 years to 700 Add a comma
,years
grams
,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
dropped by a number
of 600 grams
in 1995. However
, the consumption
of fish has increased to about 8500, which was the highest amount in 2014.
Meat and salt had a different start in 1985. Salt consumption
started at almost a number
of 500 grams
, while
it decreased by 300 grams
at
2010 became 200 Change preposition
in
grams
. The consumption
of meat gradually went up by 100 grams
and finished by
the same Change preposition
with
number
of salts at 200 grams
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