With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

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In the past people used to eat a
lot
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of organic
foods
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, but nowadays time has changed, and humanity
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been using more and more
GM
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food
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.
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, I would say that
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health
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individuals should use more organic
foods
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rather
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modified
food
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,
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however
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a
lot
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of using
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can lead to serious problems. One strong argument in favour of advantages is
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cost of
products
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.
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kinds
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of
food
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can
be easily find
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in any supermarket or
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. Because
GM
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foods
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made
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in factories,
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there are a
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of
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food
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factories in the world.
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means that individuals will save their money, and time.
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, the American
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statistic of
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2022 year showed that genetically modified
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cost
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just over 2
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cheaper.
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in some
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GM
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products
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can win organic
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. There are several arguments why organic
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is better than
GM
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food
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. people’s
health
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. The first factor
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is
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health
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. There might be difficulties with
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such
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as heart, stomach, head diseases and so on.
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means that human beings who use
GM
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products
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a
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will
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live
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less
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years.
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the statistics of
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last
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2022
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just over 61 percent
people
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of people
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died
cause
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because
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of
overweight
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being overweight
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and
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health
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problems
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caused
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GM
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products
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, it is
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of growing. When human beings
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eat a
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of
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food
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individual’s
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brain
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will think much worse,
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moreover
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people will grow slowly.
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research showed that
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centuries ago our ancestors were
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10 to 15 times bigger than now,
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were
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much
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. Because everyone
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that time
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.
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control of eating and use less
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foods
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will protect our
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,
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will keep our living years.
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i
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would suppose that
GM
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food
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can not replace organic
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. Using more organic
food
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can extend people’s
life
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, and
keeping
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keep them
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healthy.
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