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With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

#population #people #focus #gm #foods
In the past people used to eat a
lot
 of organic
foods
, but nowadays time has changed, and humanity
have
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 been using more and more
GM
food
.
Overall
, I would say that
for keeping
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to keep
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health
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healthy
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 individuals should use more organic
foods
 rather
Genetically
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than Genetically
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 modified
food
,
however
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,however
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 a
lot
 of using
letter
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letters
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 can lead to serious problems. One strong argument in favour of advantages is
cheap
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 cost of
products
.
This
kinds
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 of
food
 can
be easily find
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 in any supermarket or
shops
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shop
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. Because
GM
foods
made
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are made
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 in factories,
furthermore
 there are a
lot
 of
GM
food
 factories in the world.
This
 means that individuals will save their money, and time.
For instance
, the American
world
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 statistic of
last
 2022 year showed that genetically modified
food
cost
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costs
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 just over 2
percent
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per cent
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 cheaper.
Therefore
 in some
aspects
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GM
products
 can win organic
food
. There are several arguments why organic
food
 is better than
GM
food
. people’s
health
. The first factor
it
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apply
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is
human’s
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human
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health
. There might be difficulties with
organism
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organisms
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such
 as heart, stomach, head diseases and so on.
This
 means that human beings who use
GM
products
 a
lot
 will
leave
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live
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less
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fewer
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 years.
According to
 the statistics of
last
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apply
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2022
year
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,year
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 just over 61 percent
people
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of people
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 died
cause
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because
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 of
overweight
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being overweight
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 and
health
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having health
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 problems
which
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apply
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caused
from
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by
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GM
products
.
Secondly
, it is
process
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the process
a process
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 of growing. When human beings
will
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eat a
lot
 of
GM
food
individual’s
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individual
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brain
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brains
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 will think much worse,
moreover
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 people will grow slowly.
The biology
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 research showed that
few
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a few
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 centuries ago our ancestors were
from
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apply
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10 to 15 times bigger than now,
furthermore
were
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 much
clever
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. Because everyone
in
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at
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 that time
can wrote
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.
Therefore
 control of eating and use less
GM
foods
 will protect our
health
,
furthermore
 will keep our living years.
To conclude
i
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 would suppose that
GM
food
 can not replace organic
food
. Using more organic
food
 can extend people’s
life
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lives
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, and
keeping
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keep them
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 healthy.
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