You have a bad experince at a restaurent and write a letter to complain to the manager
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you to inform you about our experience in your restaurant. We had dinner at your place Linking Words
last
Sunday night to celebrate our anniversary with my partner and seems like your employees need training on how to handle your customers.
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Firstly
, it took time for them to give us the menu. Linking Words
Secondly
, when they served our food it was wronged, I ordered medium rare steak Linking Words
instead
she gave me buttered chicken. Linking Words
Lastly
, when she served the correct food it was cold as ice. Linking Words
Also
, when I called her attention she just looked at me despite waving at her continuously.
She was rude and Linking Words
not
pay attention even though she was not busy that night.
I want you to take action on what happened on that day. Add a missing verb
did not
In addition
, give an incident report, especially the waitress who served us.
She needs to know how to treat the customer right.
Yours faithfully,
Erica HanLinking Words
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Improve the structure of your letter by organizing the content into clear paragraphs, each dealing with a separate aspect of your complaint.
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Consistently use polite language and formal expressions suitable for a complaint letter to maintain an appropriate tone throughout your correspondence.
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