It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of juveniles committing crimes that are attributed to the
media
. In fact, I firmly agree with this
statement and will propose some solutions to this
phenomenon in this
essay.
To begin
with, it has become increasingly common for media
to show violence on television so that many people can access
it easily. It affects the behaviour of youngsters. They tend to imitate the violence in media
as they think it makes them look cool among others. For instance
, students bully their friends at the school. However
, there are some solutions that can be used to resolve this
phenomenon. The first solution is making strict laws. The government needs to take action in order to help the young generation. The media
can not post anything that can be harmful to youngsters. By having strict laws, students can not access
violence on many sources of information.
The next solution is limiting the juvenile to access
media
. In this
modern era, youngsters can easily access
many sites on social media
. However
, they access
shows that are not suitable for their ages. Parents need to limit their children
's on media
and make sure their children
get the shows that are suitable for them. For instance
, parents allow their children
to surf on media
social only for 2 hours a day. Consequently
, children
can use their time more on study.
To sum up
, the media
is the main contributor to the juvenile crime. Having considered the problem, the effective solutions are making strict laws and limiting access
to social media
for juveniles.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite