The table shows data about the average length of time (in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of countries.

The table shows data about the average length of time (in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of countries.
The chart gives information about the typical time that patients spend with doctors in various countries, split by
age
group. We can see that the most common trend is for the time to increase consistently with
age
.
For example
, the figure in France more than doubles from 16 to 38
minutes
between the youngest and oldest people.
Likewise
, the USA figure rises from 13 to 31, the UK from 9 to 21, and Italy from 17 to 29. These are all substantial increases. Chile has a consistent but much slighter climb, from 32 to 39
minutes
. Brazil
also
shows a rise,
although
after
age
60 there is a decline from 26
minutes
to an eventual 20. India has a more marked rise and fall, peaking at 21
minutes
for people aged 40 to 60, declining to 11
minutes
for 70 plus. Two countries are exceptions. Japan fluctuates across the
age
groups, between 12 and 16
minutes
. Kenya declines steadily as
age
increases, from 15
minutes
for the youngest to 10
minutes
for the oldest people.
Overall
, time spent with doctors generally increases with
age
, except in Japan and Kenya.
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