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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
Nowadays, it
is argue
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 that
people
 who do
high level
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high-level
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jobs
 have to
work
 in a
country
 where they took an
education
 for their job,
while
other
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others
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 feel
otherwise
. In
this
 essay, I will explore both these opinions, and I will share my opinion that supports
the
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freedom
.
Firstly
, I will explain the importance of
rules
 for working as a professional that allow
to
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one to
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 do career
jobs
, and
secondly
, I will consider the
barriers
 for individuals who want to continue their
job
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jobs
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in
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apply
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overseas. First of all, all countries have their own
rules
 for professionals,
such
 as lawyers and doctors. Because of
this
, the
rules
 for working areas can
be vary
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 in different countries.
Moreover
, they took lessons about their home
country
’s
rules
, during the
education
 and training.
As a result
, they can do their
jobs
 in their hometown, and they
do
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will
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 not be able to
work
 abroad. They have to know other countries’
rules
 for working there.
Therefore
, professionals have to
take
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get
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 another
education
 and training
for doing
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to do
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 their
jobs
 in
the
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apply
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different
country
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countries
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.
For example
, lawyers cannot
work
 in another
country
 without knowing the legislation which is from
other state
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another state
other states
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.
On the other hand
,
freedom
 for
people
 is the most important thing, and it includes working
indepence
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independently
 where the person wants.
However
, there are some
barriers
 that block
this
freedom
,
such
 as
difference
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differences
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 in languages, but these
barriers
 are not impossible to tackle. In my opinion,
professional
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professionals
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 can
work
 everywhere if their curriculum vitae is adequate to
work
 there.
For instance
, a lawyer who is from my
country
 works in the United Kingdom as a solicitor. She could surpass all of these
barriers
 to do it. In conclusion, many
people
 think that
people
 have to
work
 in where they took their
education
, whilst others feel
oppositively
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positively
oppositely
. In my opinion,
the
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apply
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freedom
 should be given to
people
 who want to
work
 abroad.
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  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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