The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the ratio for household expenses
such
as Housing, transportation, Food,
healthcare
and other
goods
and
services
in two different countries Japan and Malaysia in 2016.
Overall
, most Japanese people are spending the highest amount share for other
goods
and
services
and the least on
Healthcare
.
While
in Malaysia the population spent on housing and the lowest is in Japan. As per the pie graph, in
Japan
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the population used a large number of shares of salaries spent on other
goods
and
services
29% in 2010 and on Food 24%.
Furthermore
, for transport and ,housing they are spending almost the same per cent 20% to 21% and the least income they use in the
healthcare
sector in the year 2010. Malaysian community used their biggest wages part for housing 34% in 2010 . After their expenditures in food and other
goods
and
services
27% to 26% in 2010. On the other ,hand they use fewer amounts on
healthcare
and transport facilities.
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