You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Sir, I am writing to
take
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permission for the
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I would like to opt
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Being a marketing handler of the
company
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, I always look for different strategies and techniques from the competitor firms. Today, I have seen an
add
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ad
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which highlights a marketing training
course
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by the famous CEO of the Marketing
Company
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. Topics like ways of
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promoting
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a product, Handling customers online,
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to
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customers
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customers'
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interest
for
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the long run will
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be discussed during its sessions. Actually, the cost of
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course
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is very high. It would be difficult for me to afford it. But,
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problem could be solved if I will start training from the
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's side.
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would help me to get 30% off. It just required the
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to sign up
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app and suggest my name for classes. Talking about the benefits of
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course
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, it will not only help us to get better ideas for promotions but
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how we can incline the marketing of the product at international level and connect the audience with our firm. I would really appreciate
if
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you
will
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have a look over
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since
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is for the benefit of our
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and I would not want to
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this
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opportunity. Yours faithfully, Jashan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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