The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
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The line graph provides information on the number of reports about
noise
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received by Environmental Health authorities during the years spanning from 1980 to 1996 in the city of Newtown.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend mostly for all aspects ,
moreover
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for household complaints.
In contrast
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road works, decreased during the period on 550 reports in a year. The number of cases reported from 1980 to 1984 levelled off for traffic
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and domestic households.
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, had a drop for four years. It is important to mention that domestic
noise
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complaints saw a dramatic increase and reached their peak in 1996, with more than 1,200 cases reported.
While
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street works
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complaints declined sharply, dropping to less than 100 in 1996.
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to these trends, there was a gradual, steady increase in reports concerning factory
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, progressing from 400 to 700 cases annually over the entire timeframe. .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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