The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map diagram provides the information about ground floor of library development between 2001 and 2009.

Overall

, there were several changes related to the left side of the room with some additional book bookshelves and

also

the right side and the back of the library remained changed.

Additionally

, Some areas were noticed to stay the same others seemed to be set up. Regarding the book corner, only a few books corner to see on the left side with just historian books provided,

then

it contains other books

Change preposition

from

show examples

the next eight years

such

as Economics, Law, Kitchen, Fiction, and History.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

100 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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