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Companies now prefer to hire people with good social skills as well as good academic qualifications. Do you think that social skills are now getting more important than educational qualifications?

#companies #people #skills #qualifications
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Everybody knows that business life is global nowadays since
technology
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 has developed, and a
lot
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 of
companies
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 prefer their employees to be socially good.
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, others want to have academic qualifications. I think It depends on the job. I strongly believe that social
skills
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 are more important than academics. In
this
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 essay, I will explain some of the reasons. On the one hand, a
lot
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 of
companies
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 work ınternatıonally and for them, communication or marketing is so important. ın adıtıon, many
companies
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 want to change
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 the chaotic situation. The world changes every time.
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 the fact that they want to adapt to the new situations quickly.
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, in Iraq they had to torrıst attack for 10 years, at that time a
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 of
companies
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 moved to another country which is why they needed somebody who could speak English well.
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, a
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 of people want academic qualifications
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 as science and business. They want to do scientific research. that's why
companies
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 prefer academic qualifications.
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, some
companies
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 work on
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 and they want to have powerful departments.
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, they need an academician because only he has good experience and information about their work. It is not important to have social
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.
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, there is a company called Biontec and they find some medicine to use for coronaviruses. They have been successful, thanks to scientists there.
To sum up
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, some
companies
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 need social
skills
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, others do not, it depends on the jobs. In my opinion, social
skills
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 are more important than academics because we live in
technology
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 time, and thanks to
technology
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, business is becoming global.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Collaboration
  • Teamwork
  • Leadership
  • Automation
  • Cultural awareness
  • Specialized fields
  • Academic credentials
  • Professional development
  • Networking
  • Cognitive abilities
  • Soft skills
  • Hard skills
  • Adaptability
  • Problem-solving
  • Emotional quotient (EQ)
  • Intellectual quotient (IQ)
  • Workforce dynamics
  • Social aptitude
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