The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps depict the industrial area in the town of Nobition and the future design plan for its development.
Overall
, at the current time, the main constructions in Linking Words
this
place are factories, Linking Words
however
, they will be replaced by residential buildings and other amenities like a playground, health care and commercial centre.
At present, there is a big roundabout in the central area which links to the East by a main Linking Words
road
. Use synonyms
In addition
, many factories are constructed along the main Linking Words
road
to the East and the roundabout. To the North of the town, there is farmland which is separated from the industry by a river. On the South of Use synonyms
this
location, a short Linking Words
road
connects the roundabout and the Use synonyms
road
which runs from the Use synonyms
West
to the East.
In the future, A significant change will replace all the factories as many houses built along the main Use synonyms
road
to the East and to the North Use synonyms
West
of the roundabout. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the farmland will be abolished and a house will be built Linking Words
instead
. A bridge to the North and a small Linking Words
road
to the Use synonyms
West
will be built to bring the convenience of travelling. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there is a minimal change on the short Linking Words
road
to the South which is a small roundabout that will replace the conjunction which links to the long Use synonyms
road
on the South. Use synonyms
Finally
, a medical centre on the East of the short Linking Words
road
and some shops on its Use synonyms
West
will be situated as well.Use synonyms
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