The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The presented diagrams
shows
Change the verb form
show
a
development of Correct article usage
the
Hospital
called Queen Mary Correct article usage
a Hospital
for
Change preposition
over
40-year
span, Add an article
a 40-year
since
its original construction in 1960 till 2000.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the comparison of 3 diagrams illustrates a
dramatic changes that have taken place at Correct article usage
the
hospital
. The crucial development was an expansion of Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
cancer
Correct article usage
the cancer
centre
and nursing school
.
The noticable
change Correct your spelling
noticeable
is
Wrong verb form
was
closing
of the shopping Correct article usage
the closing
centre
and farmland, which were located controversy to hospital
and replaced by Correct article usage
the hospital
nursing
Add an article
the nursing
a nursing
school
, cancer
cnetre
and pharmacy in 1980. The pharmacy was built right near the hospital. So, Correct your spelling
centre
shopping
Correct article usage
the shopping
centres
land was divided Fix the agreement mistake
centre
to
two, Change preposition
into
where
now exist Correct word choice
which
cancer
centre
and pharmacy
.
Correct article usage
a pharmacy
Also
, the car park's size was decreased twice same
as Correct article usage
the same
nursing
Correct article usage
the nursing
school
. The reason for these change
is Fix the agreement mistake
changes
expansion
of Add an article
an expansion
the expansion
cancer
Correct article usage
the cancer
centre
, which now
located Add a missing verb
is now
on
Change preposition
in
previous
nursing Correct article usage
the previous
school
's place. The main road remained unchanged as Queen Mary Hospital.Submitted by dnm.best on
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