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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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The given diagram depicts the process of creating electrical energy from geothermal power. As can be seen,
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 method contains a number of steps. First of all, cool water is to be pushed down approximately five kilometres to arrive at the injection well. In the next step, the water will be sent to the production well through scorching stones. The third stage involves pumping up the aforementioned water -which is now warm- to reach a condenser that transforms it into steam.
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, the steam enters the turbine to eventually power a generator and
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 make electricity.
To sum up
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, the procedure of converting geothermal energy to power involves several stages.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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