You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city. Write a letter to your friend:, 1.Explain what you like to do. 2.Tell him/her what type of work or studies you had completed. 3.Ask for assistance in connecting an appropriate institution

Hello Rohit, How are things going with you in the city? First of all,

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really apologize for not replying to your previous letter, you know my situation;

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am so confused about my career and

college

life. I writing

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to you to

know

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get

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some information about one of the

college

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name

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centennial

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Centennial College

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, which is located in your city. I am planning to

take

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admission

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the architecture technician program. I have checked the reviews online, i am believing it would be

best

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college

for me. I recently completed

here

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apply

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my diploma in

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,

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3 years course will definitely boost my education career. I heard that

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college

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helps

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the placement of students. I will be very grateful if you can check on accommodation and needed amenities. Hope to see you soon.

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lovely, Jaspreet