The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
The diagram below depicts the procedure of creating
sugar
out of sugar
cane. As can be seen, the process of transforming sugar
cane into the final production of edible sugar
contains several steps.
First of all, we have to implant sugar
canes and wait for their growth for a year or 3 months more maximum. Following that, the canes should be harvested either by complex and modern trucks or in the traditional way and by hand. The next step will be crushing them in order to extract a juice that will be purified using a special filter. Then
, the aforementioned juice will be converted to syrup via an evaporator. After
this
stage is complete, a centrifuge will divide the sugar
from other elements of the syrup. Eventually, the wet production is to be dried and cooled in order to become final.
To sum up
, in order to transform sugar
cane into sugar
we need to take several steps and It is a complex process.Submitted by kimiaamousavii on
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