One of your friends lives in another country.you want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. Describe why you want to work in that country. Tell him about your skills and experience. As some other questions related to work.

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Hi Sam, How are you doing man? I hope you are enjoying Australia's warm summers, better than here, it's too cold here in India. I have some exciting news to tell you. Guess What? I got my work visa for Australia and I am really excited to work there as it was my dream to move abroad and grab the opportunities.

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, I believe working in a different culture will help in learning their working style and new language. As you know, my passion was and will always be cooking, which I have been doing for 2 years in one of the best five-star hotels in India, the Taj. So, I am confident about my culinary skills, I can cook different cuisines that's said continental food is my speciality. Can you give me some information about hunting jobs and tailoring my resume

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Can't wait to meet you. Regards, Manu

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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One of your friends lives in another country.you want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. Describe why you want to work in that country. Tell him about your skills and experience. As some other questions related to work.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.

Topic: Some people say that poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it difficult to have access to university education. What should be done to solve this problem? 250 words.

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