You bought a ticket for a music concert. You’re unable to attend the concert. You want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to give him the ticket. In your letter, Give detailed information about the concert Explain why you’re unable to attend the concert Tell him how to get the ticket

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Hello Tithi, Long time, no see. I hope you are doing well. I have something exciting to offer you. Guess what? I bought a ticket to Selena Gomez's live music concert, which is happening next Friday at The Assembly Park in Vaughan and the entry will start

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7 pm. The concert is sponsored by a local committee and the money will go to donations for sick kids. Unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the event as I have an official meeting that day and my participation is necessary. So,

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sudden clash of events , my priority will be to attend the company meeting. I know you are a great fan of Selena, Why don't you go and enjoy the live music? See, I could have given

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free voucher to anyone but I have chosen you because we are best friends and I know how you like

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singer. I want to see some good pictures from the music festival. Should I email you the tickets or send the picture? Best Regards, Manu

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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178 words

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Some people believe that all company decision should be taken by managers, whereas, others think it is better to include employees while decision making ? Discuss both points and give your opinion

Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used for other purposes such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

An english speaking friends son wrote to you that his/her son would travel to country for a short holiday before starting his university. write a letter to the friend to Invite the friend’s son to visit. Suggest interesting things he can do in the country. Describe the weather in the country.