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children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic,commercial and social perspective. What are the causes of these pressuers and what meassures shold be taken to reduce these pressures?

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Children
 in the new generation are likely to be in a severely stressed background in several aspects
such
 as learning, economic and social etcetera.
However
, some of the situations can be avoided to mitigate the bad effects on them. Through
this
 essay, hope to discuss the matter and measures that can be taken to avoid the effects.
Firstly
, most of them are under huge pressure in their academic environment, as now they have to compete globally, not only with the next door or with
children
 in the same area or country.
Parents
also
 pull them into the competition and expect success, which they were not able to achieve in their childhood. When moving with peer groups,
children
 always try to compare themselves with others . Most of the teenage students have luxury devices.
For instance
, they may have smartphones, tablets, and comfortable vehicles. Those who are not able to get those things, feel less comfortable moving with same-age students and they may tend to argue with their
parents
 and try to obtain those things even if they suffering from economic matters. For example, one of my cousin's daughters refused to go to school and the reason that they did not have a car even other friends had.
On the other hand
,
parents
 should teach their
children
 to live with what they have. Not only that
children
 should be aware of
parents
' economic capacity.
Otherwise
, conflicts can occur between
children
 and
parents
. Teachers are the other ones to guide students properly and should teach them to face, win humbly and lose with grace. Helping hand for others is an excellent quality person and
children
 have to practice it from a small age. Both
parents
 and teachers should expect reliable and possible things only from the
children
.
Finally
, now
children
 are in a huge stressful mind in most of the aspects
such
 as academic, commercial and social.
Parents
 and teachers are the onus to minimize the bad effects on them.
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