Some people assert that history has little value in the contemporary world. But some believe that history is needed today to learn from the past. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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made up of the things Change the verb form
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that happens
happens
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happened
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differs
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history
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whether it
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small importance in Wrong verb form
has
the
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history
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the
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today
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a different
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mindset
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or
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in or
values
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Today
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veiw
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view
values
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in
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pasts
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people
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festivales
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festival
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Diwali
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was clebrated
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celebrated
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crakers
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crackers
forgot
about the main idea Wrong verb form
forgotten
for
celebrating the festival.
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of
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people
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belives
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believe
the
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apply
today
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the
past experiences have their own beliefs. One is that Correct article usage
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by
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studing
or remembering the old times it helps the young generation to be attached Correct your spelling
studying
with
their cultural Change preposition
to
values
. They will learn the Use synonyms
values
taught by their grandparents or Use synonyms
grand
grand-parents which will help them to be Correct word choice
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a
good human Correct article usage
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being
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beings
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its
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apply
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and etectera
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. Another reason is that Correct your spelling
etcetera
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apply
to maintain
or Change preposition
for maintaining
save
the country in which we are living. The feeling of Wrong verb form
saving
patriotisim
should be increased in Correct your spelling
patriotism
current
generation.
In conclusion, Add an article
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the present
history
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